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小班数学教案：爸爸、妈妈和我（图片标记匹配）
活动目标 1、尝试分辨爸爸妈妈和宝宝的物品，感知物品的大小及其它特征。 2、学会按爸爸妈妈和宝宝的图片标记匹配相应的物品。 1、有初步地关心爸爸妈妈的情感体验。 活动准备： 教具：爸爸妈妈和宝宝的图片各一张，三个人的袜子、衣服等衣物若干。 学具：《幼儿用书》人手一册。 活动过程： 1、这是谁的衣服。 出示爸爸妈妈和宝宝的图片，向幼儿介绍：这是宝宝的一家。引导幼儿观察并说出谁是爸爸，谁是妈妈，谁是宝宝，你是怎么看出来的。 出示实物衣服、裤子等服装图片，请幼儿说说这些是什么？有什么不同？这是谁的衣服？你是怎么知道的？
关于小学教师个人教学心得体会优选八篇
作为一一名任课教师，我们或许都有过这样的体验，每当上完一节好课，会让你有意犹未尽之感，全身都会感到舒爽之至。而往往公开课更容易达到这样的境界。想想为什么，一个很重要的原因就是我们无形中做到了“懂”、“透”、“化”。 总之，我们在处理教材上真正做到“懂”、“透”、“化”，真正做到“钻进去，走出来”，就会达到创设教材研究的理想境界。
人教部编版七年级下册阿长与《山海经》教案
四、总结存储1.教师总结。纵观作者对阿长形象的刻画，犹如一部连续剧。从“喜欢切切察察”，对“我”过分看管，到睡相粗俗；从“懂得许多规矩”，特别是“元旦的古怪仪式”，到给“我”讲长毛的故事，再到“谋害”隐鼠，多侧面多角度地展现出阿长的个性特点：粗俗好事，迷信无知，却又乐天安命，简单率性。直到阿长给“我”买来《山海经》，先抑后扬的表达效果才充分显现，阿长纯朴善良、仁厚慈爱的品格在前文的衬托下显得格外闪光。而文章末尾，作者饱含深情地祝祷，将全文情感推向高潮。2.课外练笔。在你的童年生活中，有没有像阿长这样给你留下深刻印象的普通人？你怎样看待他们的优缺点？谈一谈你的想法和感受。（200字左右）【设计意图】在学生对课文有了整体的认知之后，教师总结提升。然后要求学生发现生活中普通人的闪光点，发现人性美，并进行课外练笔，有利于学生在实践中巩固技能，以读促写，读写结合，不仅可以加深对课文内容的理解，还能锻炼学生的写作能力。
人教部编版七年级下册叶圣陶先生二三事教案
我认识圣陶先生是在成都，1941年春天的一个细雨蒙蒙的上午。那时候我在华西大学中国文化研究所工作，圣陶先生在四川省教育科学馆工作。教育科学馆计划出一套供中学语文教师用的参考书。其中有一本《精读指导举隅》和一本《略读指导举隅》，是由圣陶先生和朱佩弦先生合作编写的。计划里边还有一本讲文法的书，圣陶先生从顾颉刚先生那里知道我曾经在云南大学教过这门课，就来征求我的意见，能否答应写这样一本书。我第一次见到圣陶先生，跟我想象中的“文学家”的形象全不一样：一件旧棉袍，一把油纸雨伞，说话慢言细语，像一位老塾师。他说明来意之后，我答应试试看。又随便谈了几句关于语文教学的话，他就回去了。那时候圣陶先生从乐山搬来成都不久，住家和办公都在郊外。过了几天，他让人送来一套正中书局的国文课本，供我写书取用例句。
人教部编版七年级下册最苦与最乐教案
梁启超（1873—1929），字卓如，号任公，别号饮冰室主人。广东新会人，思想家、学者。清朝光绪年间举人，戊戌变法（百日维新）领袖之一、中国近代维新派、新法家代表人物。幼年受传统教育，光绪十年（1884）中秀才，1889年中举。后从师于康有为，成为资产阶级改良派的宣传家。维新变法前，协助康有为一起联合在京应试举人发动“公车上书”运动，此后先后领导北京和上海的强学会，又与黄遵宪一起办《时务报》，任长沙时务学堂的总教习，并著《变法通议》为变法做宣传。戊戌变法失败后，逃亡日本。晚年任清华国学研究院导师。他一生著述颇丰，著有《清代学术概论》《中国近三百年学术史》等，著作大多收入《饮冰室合集》。文学知识议论文议论文是一种以议论为主要表达方式，通过摆事实、讲道理，直接表达作者的观点和主张的常用文体。论点、论据和论证，是议论文的三要素。
人教部编版语文八年级下册核舟记教案
《核舟记》是一篇说明性质的文言文，作者在完整而深刻地理解雕刻艺术构思的基础上，合理安排材料，运用简练生动的文字再现了“核舟”的形象。本课教学设计，注重学生自主学习、自主探究、自主拓展，教师予以有效指导。教学中的各个环节环环相扣，思路清晰。在自主学习的过程中，掌握文章的基本内容；在合作学习的过程中，完成文言知识卡片的归纳整理；在探究学习的过程中，通过“找一找”“品一品”两个环节，让学生深入到文本中进行赏析，感知核舟的奇巧，感悟雕刻者技艺的精巧和构思的精妙，学习作者行文的巧妙，体会到文章语言的简洁、准确和生动；在布置作业环节，联系课堂内外，有拓展延伸的阅读，有学以致用的练笔。整个教学设计适应了学生各种能力的发展需要，提高了学生的语文素养。疑难探究《核舟记》一般被视为说明文，但文中包含了大量的描写。对此应该如何理解？首先，说明文是今天我们按照记叙文、说明文、议论文三大文体分类为之做出的界定，而古人的文体分类中并无“说明文”一类，《核舟记》这种记物之文和记游、记亭台楼阁之文都属于“杂记”。
人教部编版语文九年级下册曹刿论战教案
开门见山，免去了君臣相见的繁文缛节的叙述；“齐人三鼓”一句，就包括了齐军的第一次和第二次击鼓进击而鲁军未出击的过程，也写出了齐军依仗数量上的优势企图取胜的急切心理；两个“可矣”写出了鲁军进军的情况；“辙乱”“旗靡”四个字就概括了齐军溃败的具体情况。文章抛开残酷的战争场面，无一字描写，仅一个“齐师败绩”写明战争结果。多四字句，如“曹刿请见”“牺牲玉帛”“一鼓作气”等，读来典雅端庄，辞约而意丰，言简而意明。疑难探究1.如何理解曹刿以平民身份而主动“论战”的行为？曹刿堪称中国古代平民政治家与军事家。他只是鲁国的一介平民,并非“肉食者”，本无机会参与国家大事的商讨和实施。但他凭借着一颗赤诚的爱国之心,积极参与抵御外敌入侵的政治谋划与军事行动,并创造了以弱胜强的战争奇迹。2.请试着从曹刿、鲁庄公、战争这三个角度分别用四个字对文章每一段内容进行概括。从曹刿的角度可以概括为：曹刿论战—曹刿参战—曹刿释疑。从鲁庄公的角度可以概括为：庄公将战—庄公实战—庄公问因。从战争的角度可以概括为：战前准备—战争过程—战胜原因。
人教部编版语文九年级下册梅岭三章教案
（1）看题目。题目中蕴含着诸多信息，如时间、地点、人物、事件以及诗人的心情、诗歌的意境、诗歌的类型等。抓住这一切入点，有助于我们理解诗歌的思想感情。（2）看作者。作品是作者思想情感的具体化，所以，要准确理解诗词，把握作品的思想感情，就不能脱离作者孤立地臆断。作者的生平、写作风格、思想等等，无不影响着作者的情绪，所以，在鉴赏作品时，首先要了解作者的相关背景等。（3）看时代。把握时代风貌特征，把诗歌放在时代背景下评析，才能准确领悟其蕴含的思想感情。（4）看意象。诗歌的创作讲究含蓄、凝练。诗人的抒情往往不是情感的直接流露，而是注重弦外之音、言外之意。写景则借景抒情，咏物则托物言志。因此意象也就是作者的主观感情与客观物象的完美结合，是诗人情感显现的载体。把握诗中的意象，就能参悟意境，理解诗中蕴含的情感。
人教部编版语文九年级下册唐雎不辱使命教案
预设 对比与映衬、渲染与烘托。由于文章始终是在人物对话中展开的，人物语言和行为遵循“刺激—反应”模式平行而下，自然形成了对比，造成了映衬互见的效果。如围绕易地问题，就有秦王的欲求与安陵君的坚守，有秦王的无理狡辩与唐雎的据理抗争；在意志较量方面，则有“天子之怒”与“布衣之怒”的对垒。秦王所说的“天子之怒”，唐雎的“未尝闻”；唐雎所说的“布衣之怒”，秦王归之于“免冠徒跣，以头抢地”。一个拒绝回答，非常傲气；一个丑化描述，极为轻蔑。这样，人物形象对比鲜明，相互衬托，将一场正义与非正义的较量真实而生动地展现出来。作者为了追求夸张、强化的效果，多借助人物语言渲染气势、烘托气氛，增强故事的“现场感”。如秦王说“灭韩亡魏”，目的是从气势上压倒对手；唐雎罗列刺客的壮举，也表明了血拼到底的气概。秦王先说“灭韩亡魏”，气势夺人；后说“韩、魏灭亡”，辞格已卑。这些生动的描写，极大地凸显了人物性格。
人教部编版语文九年级下册邹忌讽齐王纳谏教案
第二，《战国策》描写人物的性格和活动更加具体细致，也就更显得生动活泼。《左传》描写人物，大抵是简笔勾勒。第三，《战国策》所记的策士说辞，常常引用生动的寓言故事，这也是以文学手段帮助说理的方法。这些寓言，形象鲜明，寓意深刻，又浅显易懂，独立地看也是中国文学宝库中的璀璨明珠。疑难探究除了高超的语言艺术，邹忌劝谏成功还有哪些重要因素？除了高超的语言艺术，邹忌能劝谏成功，还有其他重要的因素。比如：这也与邹忌善于思考、分析的个性和他的担当、责任意识相关。邹忌关心国家大事，一心想寻找恰当时机劝谏齐王。他在生活中经历了“比美”经历，能够深入思考、分析，体察各人的情状心理，并敏锐地由个人体验联系到国家大事，想到齐王所受之蔽，于是果断地进行劝谏。这也离不开齐王广开言路的胸襟和果断行事的理政智慧。齐王听了邹忌的劝谏，马上“下令”，并且分上、中、下三种不同层面赏赐，立刻实施，表现出一位贤明君主的特点。
人教部编版语文九年级上册任务三尝试创作（2）教案
我认为这首诗，一共三节，每节句数、字数相当，结构工整，符合建筑美的特点，同时也使诗歌具有了节奏感；另外这首诗音韵和谐，朗朗上口。我认为这首诗相同句式回环往复，给人留下深刻印象。我认为此诗语言犹如清水出芙蓉，清丽淡雅，营造了唯美纯净的世界。…………师：节奏把握这一技巧相对比较简单，大家的创作和点评都很有水准，很好。希望大家在以后课余的诗歌创作中能兼顾到我们现在所谈的技巧。【设计意图】讲诗歌的创作技巧，既要讲出最关键的技巧，也要结合实例，让讲解深入浅出，让学生在理解的同时加以训练，使学生能够加深对知识点的理解。三、课内演练，巩固技法 学习本节课的技法之后，请大家写一首诗或一个诗歌片段，要求运用本节课所讲的诗歌写作技巧。(学生思考创作并展示)
人教部编版语文九年级上册任务二诗歌朗诵（2）教案
1.主持人致开幕词。2.参赛选手按时到场、抽签。3.主持人介绍比赛规则和评分细则。（1）分年级比赛，各年级同时进行，并根据相同的评分标准来评奖。（2）比赛规则：①参赛选手须使用普通话，尽可能脱稿朗诵，并富有感情色彩，辅以丰富的肢体语言；②每位选手比赛时间限定在3-5分钟，如果超时或不足，评委将适当扣分；③比赛顺序由抽签决定，中途不得变更顺序，比赛需紧凑进行，选手上场迟到2分钟以上则视为弃权；④参赛选手须严格遵守比赛规则，在比赛过程中若有异议，由评委会裁定。4.主持人报幕，请选手上台朗诵。5.比赛结束后，邀请评委上台发言，工作人员进行统分。6.主持人宣布比赛结果，请嘉宾为获奖者颁奖。7.主持人宣布本次比赛结束，请嘉宾和评委退场。四、课后巩固，布置作业1.布置学生课后搜集艾青的一篇经典的、适合个人朗诵的诗歌，在课下作朗诵练习。
端午节国旗下讲话的演讲稿两篇
端午节国旗下讲话的演讲稿一 端午节是古老的传统节日，始于中国的春秋战国时期，至今已有XX多年历史。据《史记》记载，屈原，是春秋时期楚怀王的大臣。他倡导举贤授能，富国强兵，力主联齐抗秦，遭到贵族强烈反对，屈原去职，被赶出成都，流放到沅.湘流域。他在流放中，写下了忧国忧民的《离骚》.《天问》.《九歌》等不朽诗篇等，独具风貌，影响深远(因而，端午节也称诗人节)。公元前278年，秦军攻破楚国京都。屈原眼看自己的祖国被侵略，心如刀割，但是始终不忍舍弃自己的祖国，于五月五日，在写下了绝笔作《怀沙》之后，抱石投汨罗江身死，以自己的生命谱写了一曲壮丽的爱国主义乐章。传说屈原死后，楚国百姓哀痛异常，纷纷涌到汨罗江边去凭吊屈原。渔夫们划起船只，在江上来回打捞他的真身。有些渔夫拿出为屈原准备的饭团.鸡蛋等食物丢进江里，说是让鱼龙虾蟹吃饱了，就不会去咬屈大夫的身体了。人们见后纷纷效仿。后来因为怕饭团为蛟龙所食，人们想出用楝树业包饭，外缠彩丝，发展成粽子。以后每年5月5日定位端午节。端午节，门查艾.香满堂.吃粽子.洒白酒.龙舟下水喜洋洋，这些，都是曾经在端午节上最热闹的活动。当我们还沉寖在西洋节日的欢声笑语中时，据可靠消息说亚洲某国准备向联合国教科文组织申报端午节为本国的文化遗产，目前以将其列入国家遗产名录，听了这些，中国人除了惊讶只有尴尬，这不仅仅是一个传统节日的得失，不仅仅是少了几项庆祝的活动，更重要的是，这是中国的传统节日，文化内涵丰富，留存着华夏民族独特的文化记忆，每一次传统节日，就是中华民族凝聚力和向心力的一次加强和洗礼，如今，这个拥有XX多年的历史的传统佳节眼瞅着即将成为他国的国家遗产，我们将有多么尴尬?
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations-Reading and Thinking教学设计
The topic of this part is “Discover the reasons for festivals and celebrations.The Listening & Speaking & Talking part aims at talking about the experiences and feelings or emotions about the festivals and celebrations. This section aims at detecting the reason why the people celebrate the festivals, the time, the places, the types and the way of celebrations. It also explains why some traditions in the old celebrations are disappearing, like the firecrackers in the big cities and some new things are appearing like the prosperity of business or commerce. 1. Students can talk about what festivals they know and the reasons and the way of celebrating them.2. Students should learn the reading skills such as the headline and get the topic sentences, the structures of articles.3. Students can understand the past, the present situation of some festival around the world and why there are some changes about them. 4. Students can have the international awareness about the festivals.1. Students should learn the reading skills such as the headline and get the topic sentences, the structures of articles.2. Students can understand the past, the present situation of some festival around the world and why there are some changes about them.Step 1 Lead in---Small talkWhat festival do you like best ? Why ?I like the Spring Festivals because I can set off the fireworks, receive the lucky money and enjoy the Gala with my families.Step 2 Before reading---Pair workWhy do people celebrate different festivals ?The Spring Festivals is to celebrate the end of winter and the coming of spring and new life.The Mid-autumn Day is to celebrate the harvest and admire the moon.
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 3 Diverse Cultures-Discovering Useful Structure教学设计
Step 4 PracticeRead the conversation. Find out which words have been left out.Justin: Linlin, I’m going to Guizhou Province next month. I’m super excited! Any recommendations for places to visit?Linlin: Wow, cool! Guizhou is a province with a lot of cultural diversity. Places to visit...well, definitely the Huangguoshu Waterfall first.Justin: What’s special about the waterfall?Linlin: Well, have you ever heard of the Chinese novel Journey to the West ?Justin: Yes, I have. Why ?Linlin: In the back of the waterfall, you will find a cave, which is the home of the Monkey King.Justin: Really? Cool! I’ll definitely check it out.Linlin:And I strongly recommend the ethnic minority villages. You’ll find Chinese culture is much more diverse than you thought.Justin:Sounds great, thanks.Answers:Justin: Linlin, I’m going to Guizhou Province next month. I’m super excited! Do you have any recommendations for places to visit?Linlin: Wow, that’s cool! Guizhou is a province with a lot of cultural diversity. What are some places to visit in Guizhou ? Well, definitely the Huangguoshu Waterfall is the first place to visit in Guizhou Province.Justin: What’s special about the waterfall?Linlin: Well, have you ever heard of the Chinese novel Journey to the West ?Justin: Yes, I have heard of the Chinese novel Journey to the West . Why do you ask if I have heard of the Chinese novel Journey to the West?Linlin: In the back of the waterfall, you will find a cave, which is the home of the Monkey King from Journey to the West.Justin: That’s really true? It’s Cool! I’ll definitely check it out.Linlin:And I strongly recommend the ethnic minority villages on your trip to Guizhou Province. You’ll find Chinese culture is much more diverse than you thought it was.Justin:This all sounds great, thanks.
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 3 Diverse Cultures-Reading for Writing教学设计
The topic of this part is “Describe a place with distinctive cultural identity”.This section focuses on Chinese culture by introducing Chinatown, whose purpose is to show the relationship between the Chinese culture and American culture. The Chinese culture in Chinatown is an important part of American culture. Chinatown is an important window of spreading Chinese culture and the spirit homeland of oversea Chinese, where foreigners can experience Chinese culture by themselves.Concretely, the title is “Welcome to Chinatown!”, from which we can know that the article aims at introducing Chinatown. The author used the “Introduction--Body Paragraph--Conclusion” to describe the people, language, architecture, business, famous food and drinks and people’s activities, which can be a centre for Chinese culture and shows its unique charm.1. Read quickly to get main idea; read carefully to get the detailed information.2. Learn the characteristics of writing and language.3. Learn to introduce your own town according to the text.4. Learn to correct others’ writing.1. Learn the characteristics of writing and language.2. Learn to introduce your own town according to the text.Step 1 Lead in ---Small talkIn the reading part, we mentioned the Chinatown of San Francisco. How much do you know about Chinatown of San Francisco ?Chinatown is a main living place for Chinese immigrants, where you can see many Chinese-style buildings, costumes, operas, restaurants, music and even hear Chinese.Step 2 Before reading ---Predict the contentWhat is the writer’s purpose of writing this text ? How do you know ?From the title(Welcome to Chinatown) and some key words from the text(tourist, visit, visitors, experience), we can know the purpose of the text is to introduce Chinatown and show the relationship between Chinese culture and American culture.
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 4 Space Exploration-Discovering Useful Structure教学设计
The theme of the section is “Describe space facts and efforts to explore space”. Infinitives are one of non-finite verbs, as the subjects, objects, predicative, attributes and adverbials. This unit is about space exploration, which is a significant scientific activity, so every scientific activity has strong planning. Therefore, using the infinitives to show its purpose, explanations or restrictions is the best choice.1. Learn the structure, functions and features of infinitives.2. Learn to summarize some rules about infinitives to show purpose and modify.3. Learn to use infinitives in oral and writing English. 1. Learn the structure, functions and features of infinitives.2. Learn to summarize some rules about infinitives to show purpose and modify.3. Learn to use use infinitives in oral and writing English.Step 1 Lead in---Pair workLook at the following sentences and focus on the italicized infinitives. In pairs, discuss their functions. 1. I trained for a long time to fly airplanes as a fighter pilot..(作目的状语)2. As we all know, an astronaut needs to be healthy and calm in order to work in space..(作目的状语)3. First of all, you must be intelligent enough to get a related college degree..(作目的状语)4. Some scientist were determined to help humans realise their dream to explore space..(作定语)5. On 12 April 1961, Yuri Gagarin became the first person in the world to go into space..(作定语)Summary:1. 不定式的结构：to+do原形。2. 分析上面的句子，我们知道在描述太空探索时，动词不定式不仅可以用来表目的，还可以用来作定语，表修饰。
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 4 Space Exploration-Listening&Speaking＆Talking教学设计二
The themes of this part are “Talk about how to become an astronaut” and “Talk about life in space”. As Neil Armstrong said “Mystery creates wonder and wonder is the basis of man’s desire to understand. Space is difficult for human to reach, therefore, humans are full of wonders about it. However, if wanting to achieve the dream of reaching the Moon, some of our human should work hard to be an astronaut at first. Part A(Talk about how to become an astronaut) is a radio interview in a radio studio, where the host asked the Chinese astronauts about his story how to become an astronaut. Yang Liwei told his dreamed to be an astronaut since childhood. Then he worked hard to get into college at 22. The next 10 years, he gradually became an experienced pilot. At the same time, to be an astronaut, he had to study hard English, science and astronomy and trained hard to keep in good physical and mental health and to practise using space equipment. Part B (Talk about life in space) is also an interview with the astronaut Brown, who is back on the earth. The host Max asked about his space life, such as his emotion about going back the earth, the eating, shower, brushing, hobbies and his work. Part A and Part B are interviews. So expressing curiosity about the guests’ past life is a communicative skill, which students should be guided to learn.1. Students can get detailed information about how Yang Liwei became an astronaut and Max’s space life.2. Students learn to proper listening strategy to get detailed information---listening for numbers and taking notes.3. Students can learn related sentences or phrases to express their curiosity like “ I wish to know...” “I’d love to know...”4. Students can learn more about the space and astronauts, even be interested in working hard to be an astronaut
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 4 Space Exploration-Reading and Thinking教学设计一
Q4: What is the function of the International exploration ?Having astronauts from different countries on boardQ5: What can you learn from Para 4 ?China has made great achievements in exploring spaceQ6: What is the attitude to the space exploration ?SupportiveStep 6 Post reading---RetellPeople have always wanted to learn more about space. Before the mid-20th century, most people felt (1)_________ (travel) into space was an impossible dream. However, (2)____ the help of scientists, peoplesucceeded in realizing their dream (3) _________ (explore) space. On 4 October 1957, the Sputnik 1 satellite (4) ____________(launch) by the USSR. (5) ________________ scientists try to make sure nothing goes wrong, accidents can still happen. These disasters made everyone(6)___________(disappoint), but people still believe in the importance of (7) ________(carry) on space exploration. In 2003, China became the third country to (8)_____________ (independent) send humans into space. Then Shenzhou 6 and 7 completed (9)____ second manned orbit and the first Chinese spacewalk. In spite of the difficulties, scientists hope future (10)__________ (discovery) will not only enable us to understand the universe but also help us survive well into the future.Answers: 1. travelling 2. with 3. to explore 4. was launched 5. Although6. disappointed 7. carrying 8. independently 9. a 10. discoveriesStep 6 Post reading---Critical thinkingQ1: What do you think of the space exploration ? I think it is beneficial to us. Through further study of space, people will make full use of it in the future, such as the space experiments by Wang Yaping in Tian Gong 1.Q2: If you are determined to be an astronaut, what should you prepare at present ?First of all, I should study hard to get a related college degree. Besides, I must keep mental and physical healthy.Step 7. HomeworkTry to summarize the structure of the article by a mind map.
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 4 Space Exploration-Reading for Writing教学设计二
⑦在我看来, 探索太空是值得的。As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore the space.Step 10 Writing---draftRecently, students in our class have had heated a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. Students hold different ideas about it.30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life and is a waste of money. And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earth’s problems such as starvation and pollution.On the other hand，70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it，such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast. What’s more，with further space research，we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. Also，space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore the space. Not only can it promote the development of society but also enrich our life. Step 11 Pair workExchange drafts with a partner. Use this checklist to help your partner revise his/her draft.1.Does the writer explain why he/she changed/wanted to change?2.Does the writer tell how the changes have improved or will improve his/her life?3.Is the text well－organised?4.Does the writer use words and expressions to show similarities and differences?5.Are there any grammar or spelling errors?6.Does the writer use correct punctuation？
