一、说教材《短歌行》是普通高中课程标准实验教科书必修(二)第二单元的一篇略读课文,本单元安排的是先秦到南北朝时期的诗歌。《短歌行》是著名政治家、军事家、文学家曹操的作品。诗中抓住“忧”字来写诗人为什么“忧”,如何解“忧”,从而表达希望能够招揽人才、完成统一天下的雄心壮志。所以本单元安排《短歌行》一诗,对学生全面了解曹操,感受曹操在短暂的人生中竭力创造伟业的气概。二、说学生我这一课的教学对象是高一学生。他们进入高中学习的时间只有三个多月,现在已经完成了必修(一)的学习。学习了现代诗歌单元,有了一定的诗歌学习基础,初步掌握了读诗的基本方法,但是还未能形成成熟的稳定的学习方式。同时,本单元学习是高中第一次接触古代诗歌,诗歌语言上的障碍和时间上的跨度对他们来说都是学习上的困难。因此教师要引导学生自主学习,合作学习,为他们设置新的学习情境,提供合作探究的机会。
3、重要语句的理解“可是一个人并不是生来要给打败的,你尽可把它消灭掉,可就是打不败他。”解析:这是老人第一次回合之后的内心独白,也是此小说的核心精神,充分体现了老人桑地亚哥的生命理念。整句话可以分为两部分来理解,前句告诉我们,人生活在自然与社会当中,必不可少要面临一些坎坷、磨难,这些磨难、坎坷完全可以造成躯体的消灭、消亡,这是人生命的脆弱性。后句,面对挫折,只要保持一种乐观的精神,拥有一颗坚强的心灵,那么,人类执着奋斗的精神将永不磨灭。4、象征主义题目是《老人与海》,而表明上,小说是写一位老人及其在海上的经历,但实际上,老人的形象极具概括性,他已经超越了一个人的存在,而成为了人生的一种象征。老人桑地亚哥就是“硬汉子”的代表,大海则是生命旅途的象征,鲨鱼则是我们行走中的“强物”,厄运的象征。人的一生不可能一帆风顺,不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹,走在人生路途中,不可避免我们都要遇到挫折,被厄运所阻挠,只有经历与“鲨鱼”的较量,才能成为强者,唱出最美的歌。
(明确:“寡人之于国也,尽心焉耳矣”,但“寡人之民不加多,何也?”)②他认为自己对国家政务尽心尽力了,他有哪些具体做法?(明确:移民移粟)③第2—4节中孟子是怎样说明梁惠王移民移粟的措施与“邻国之政”并无本质区别的?(明确:孟子不直接回答“民不加多”的问题,而是用梁惠王熟悉的“战”设喻——设圈套,诱使对方在不知不觉中说出“不可,直不百步耳,是亦走也。”)④孟子认为怎样才能做到“王道之始”?要想“王道之成”还需采取哪些措施?(明确:“不违农时,谷不可胜食也。数罟不入氵夸池,鱼鳖不可胜食也。斧斤以时入山林,材木不可胜用也。谷与鱼鳖不可胜食,材木不可胜用五亩之宅,树之以桑,五十者可以衣帛矣。鸡豚狗彘之畜,无失其时,七十者可以食肉矣。百亩之田,勿夺其时,数口之家,可以无饥矣。谨库序之教,申之以孝涕之义,颁白者不负戴于道路矣。)这一小步的目的是想让学生通过这些问题的解答,可以进一步理清思路,掌握文的大概内容。
一、教材分析1、教学对象分析《再别康桥》的教学对象是高一学生,高一学生往往对那种纯粹的、原始的、本真的情感体会较为肤浅,《再别康桥》是新月派诗人徐志摩的传世之作,有极高美学价值,它所抒发的离愁别绪是人类共同的情感经历,通过诵读容易将学生带人诗境,唤醒他们沉寂的真情,从而引起强烈的共鸣。 2、教材地位及作用 高中语文第一册第一单元为诗歌单元,本单元收录了中国现当代的一些优秀诗篇。《再别康桥》安排在本单元的第二课,属于必读课。虽然本诗向来众说纷纭,但其艺术之美人所共知,培养学生高尚的审美情趣和良好的审美创造力是语文学科的任务,因此,从语言赏析入手,从情感体验切入,就可以让学生通过学习本课体会现代诗歌的特点,多方面感受体悟诗歌的情感,受到美的熏陶。
(一)解题:包身工──旧社会一种变相的贩卖奴隶的形式。被贩卖的多是女孩子由承办人送到工厂做工,无人身自由,所得工资全部归承办人所有,在这种形式下做工的人也称包身工。包身工是指二三十年代(时间),在上海东洋纱厂里(地点),为外国人工作的女工(工作性质)。因为这些女工在进厂时已经签订了卖身契,失去了人身的自由权,所以被称为“包身工”。标题中的“包身”二字,突出了帝国主义、封建势力对中国女童工的残酷剥削的罪行,控诉了他们的野蛮残暴的统治手段,以激起人们的义愤和同情,这是全文的中心思想。(二)关于报告文学:《包身工》属于报告文学。(同类题材有初中的《地质之光》、《谁是最可爱的人》)报告文学,是文学体裁的一种,散文的一类,是文艺通讯、速写、特写的总称,是文学创作中的“轻骑兵”。
四、教学方法和学法。课前学生搜集有关《诗经》的资料必不可少。另外,时隔数千年,年代久远,文字的障碍很大,然而,过分纠缠于文字的疏通会破坏诗歌的“气”,丧失诗歌的“神”,所以在学习时,应舍去条分缕析的理论评价,指导学生结合注释疏通文字,然后引领他们经由文字再现形象和事件,经由形象和事件领略情感,感受其中浓浓的诗情。诵读的环节是重要的,配以二胡独奏《长相思》,营造意境,学生沉浸在音乐营造的意境中反复吟咏,读出节奏,读出音调,读出感情,细细体味,让或优或喜的情愫萦绕心间,我们就触到了先民的灵魂。比兴手法为《诗经》独创,重章叠句同样别致而新鲜,教学过程中结合具体语境让学生自己去发现并进行讨论,不搞枯燥的知识传授。还引入讲故事、改写两种活泼的学习形式,从而达到加深理解的目的。
[教学反思]人教版高中语文必修二第三单元安排了《兰亭集序》《赤壁赋》《游褒禅山记》三篇古代山水游记散文,它们借游赏之事,探索生命的意义、治学的道理。师者,所以传道、授业、解惑也。高中的教材选用的都是历史经典名篇,每一篇都闪烁着儒道释等百家光辉的思想。编者要老师传道的意图很明显。即非如此,看着这些影响历代、影响世界的如日月之耀眼光华的伟大思想就躺在我们的教科书里,又如何能不讲呢?所以,我将本课的教学重难点拟定为:帮助学生建立积极的生死观,掌握多角度看问题的正确的思想方法。当然,也让学生领会了融写景、抒情、说理于一炉的大家手法。整堂课各教学环节,环环相扣,过渡自然,读、思、议、写训练到位,而且全部围绕“生死观”展开,如一篇形散神不散的散文。
请一位朗诵水平较好的学生,有感情的朗读课文12自然段,其他同学完成一项任务:这一段可否去掉?为什么?学生思考、圈画、交流、讨论,然后小组发言,其他小组补充,教师从旁予以点拨,引导学生进一步明确作者的思想情感。明确:作者要创造一种文化氛围,于自然气息之外再添一重文化气息,与“故都”题旨暗合。从行文章法上看,这里是宕开文笔,纵横议论,显出深厚的文化底蕴和开阔的思路。这一段采用议论,通过古今中外的引证,说明感秋处处有,中国文人最突出,而秋“深味”非在中国北方莫属,这其实还是为了突出故都之秋。(设计意图:提高学生探究的能力,充分把握本文的教学内容,深刻体悟作者的情感,了解作者对秋的礼赞情感,从而突破教学难点。)
学法指导:高一学生对文言文阅读已具备了一些基础知识和积累,但对如何学习文言文,还是一个新课题,因此教师应引导学生掌握学习方法,运用已有的知识框架同化新信息,建立新的智能,逐步走向独立学习的境界。一、引导学生利用课文注释,使用工具书自己翻译,必要时教师进行点拨、解难,培养自学能力。二、告诉学生翻译文言文要遵循的原则。三、调动学生思考、讨论、交流的积极性,教师适时点拨,培养学生发现问题、解决问题的能力。四、提示学生反复诵读课文,体会文章所阐述的道理。五、鼓励学生及时归纳学习文言文的方法,注意积累文言文知识。教学程序:教学本课可安排2课时。第一课时:1、导入新课:首先给学生介绍毛泽东的七绝诗《为李进同志题所摄庐山仙人洞照》:“暮色苍茫看劲松,乱云飞渡仍从容。天生一个仙人洞,无限风光在险峰。”学生通过诵读领会了“无限风光在险峰”一句的含义。随后因势利导,引出课题,指出今天我们要学习的王安石的《游褒禅山记》,就含有类似的深邃哲理。
一、导入新课人类社会越来越现代化,新科学技术日新月异,令人目不暇接,称之到了“知识爆炸”的时代也毫不为过。由此而来的是生活的快节奏,学习和工作的竞争也越来越激烈。这种竞争一直波及到了儿童,加之中国几千年来形成的望子成龙的传统观念,使作父母的把一切希望都寄托在孩子身上,实现自己未能实现的理想。祖孙三代4、2、1的局面,使12只眼睛都盯在了孩子身上,真是走路怕摔着,吃饭怕噎着,干活怕累着,要星星不敢摘月亮,要吃什么跑遍全城也要买来。这种过分保护、溺爱及过早地灌输知识会得到什么结果呢?乐观者说孩子越来越聪明,越来越早熟,将来能更好适应现代化的要求;悲观者则认为豆芽菜式的孩子将来经不起风浪,小皇帝太多了很难凝聚成统一力量,将来谁去当兵,谁去干那些艰苦创业性工作……。对孩子本身来说,是幸福还是……在此不想多发议论,还是让我们来看看动物世界的孩子们吧,也许会得到某种启迪。
说教材A.教材简析《琵琶行(并序)》是人教版《普通高中课程标准实验教科书语文》必修3第二单元的一篇讲读课文。本单元学习的是唐代诗歌,共七首诗。《琵琶行(并序)》是唐代著名现实主义诗人白居易写的一首歌行体长篇叙事诗,是我国古代叙事诗和音乐诗中的“千古绝喝”。诗歌主题鲜明、人物形象生动,抒情真切细腻,具有深刻的思想内容和卓越的艺术技巧。B.教学目标《全日制普通高中高级中学语文教学大纲》明确要求我们:在阅读教学过程中要引导学生“感受文学形象,品味文学作品的语言和艺术技巧,初步鉴赏文学作品”。而本单元的教学要求是培养学生诗歌鉴赏的能力。根据教学大纲和单元教学要求,结合本课特点,我制定本课的教学目标是:1.知识目标:了解文学常识;积累重点文言实词;品味主旨句“同是天涯沦落人,相逢何必曾相识”的内涵;感知作者把音乐描写与听者、演奏者的感情融为一体的写作特点。
(有的恒星旋转平稳均衡,有些恒星是因快速旋转而变了形。作者以拟人的手法,生动形象地描述,仿佛向我们展示了不同恒星的性情:有的稳重沉静,有的急切躁动。读来生动有趣,妙趣横生。)(3)我们探索宇宙的时候,既要勇于怀疑,又要富于想象。想象经常能够把我们带领到崭新的世界,没有想象,我们就处处碰壁。怀疑可以使我们摆脱幻想,还可以检验我们的推测。(对于未知领域的探索是需要怀疑和想象的,想象是科学的翅膀,敢于想象,并不断地探索验证,所谓“大胆假设,小心求证”怀疑否定旧知,产生新知。作者以简洁的语言阐述了想象和怀疑看似矛盾的两者在宇宙探索中的相辅相成,和谐统一。作者不囿于介绍宇宙知识,还发表自己的见解。)(4)我认为宇宙里很可能到处都充满着生命,只是我们人类尚未发现而已。我们的探索才刚刚开始。
(二)分析课文,理清思路第1、2段为第一部分,主要是叙事、写景,先叙述集会的时间、地点,然后渲染出兰亭优美的自然环境。在这里足以“游目骋怀”“极视听之娱”,可以自由地观察、思考,满足人们目视耳闻的需求。这里正是与会“畅叙幽情”、尽兴尽欢的绝好处所。这些描写都富有诗情画意,作者的情感是轻松愉快的。第3、4段为第二部分,主要是抒情、议论,作者由美景妙时引发出乐与忧、生与死的感慨。他认为人生的快乐是有极限的,待快乐得到满足时,就会感觉兴味索然。往事转眼间便成为历史,人到了生命的尽头就会死亡。作者由“一死生为虚诞,齐彭殇为妄作”的认识,产生了一种珍惜时间、眷恋生活、热爱文明的思考。虽然文中的寿夭、生死不能自由决定,从而有些伤感,但作者仍然认识到盛衰、生死是必然的。人生无常,时不我待,故著文留传后世,以承袭前人,启示来者。
4、本文的重点是说辞,虽仅百余字,却委婉曲折,步步进逼,层层深入,表现出高超的劝说艺术、游说技巧。让学生细细品味并概括说辞中包含几层意思。第一层(“秦、晋围郑,郑既知亡矣”),分析形势,以退为进,博得好感。第二层(“若亡郑而有益于君”至“君之薄也”),亡郑陪邻,动摇联盟。第三层(“若舍郑以为东道主”至“君亦无所害”),存郑有益,利益引诱。第四层(“且君尝为晋君赐矣”至“唯君图之”),追溯历史,深入离间。可见烛之武面对大国的君主,巧舌如簧,不卑不亢,从容辞令,既不刺激对方也不失本国尊严,语言的分寸掌握得恰到好处。表现出烛之武机智善辩的外交才能。5、面对风云突变的局势,晋侯没有感情用事,而表现了清醒的头脑和理智的判断。这种隐忍不发、随机应变的胸怀和谋略,正是晋文公终成霸业的根本原因。设计意图:本环节的重点是全面把握烛之武这一人物性格特征,以及退秦师过程中体现出的非凡的胆识以及高超的谋略和语言艺术。
(1)“问君西游何时还……使人听此凋朱颜。”诗题下未注明送何人入蜀,所以这里的“问君”无妨假定实有其人,可以读得亲切一些。将行而问“何时还”,已有不可行之意,重音要落在“不可攀”三字上,当用劝说的语气读。以下四句借鸟声渲染旅途中悲凉凄清的氛围,读时要放低声调,有干里孤身之感,至“愁空山”徐徐而上。然后用感喟的语调读主旨句,至“凋朱颜”略作一顿,以示意犹未尽。(2)“连峰去天不盈尺……胡为乎来哉!”仍是说不可行,但内容加深了一层,因为说的是蜀道的险恶。前四句不是纯客观的描写,读时须设想这是旅游者攀援于“连峰”“绝壁”之上置身于“飞湍瀑流”之间,要使听者感到惊心动魄。读后可作稍长停顿,再用“其险也如此”缓缓收住。末句是诗人借用蜀人的口气,对历险而来的游者深表叹息——“胡为乎来哉”不是询问,当用降调读,暗含“何苦而来”之意。
三、教学目标根据《锦瑟》诗的地位作用以及学生的实际情况,还有在古诗词教学方面课程标准的相关要求,现确定以下“三维教学目标”:(一)知识与技能目标:感受体悟古典诗歌的意境美,发挥合理的主观能动性进行创新性的阅读鉴赏,正确认识意象在诗歌意境中的重要作用。并在上述的基础上提高鉴赏能力和审美情操。(二)过程与方法目标:《锦瑟》诗的讲解采用“引导与自我生成”的方法,从老师的引导开始,以学生的研讨交流再加之教师的总结结束。利用教师引导和师生互动刺激学生的领悟力,提高学生的认知水平与能力。(三)情感态度价值观目标:培养学生在尊重传统文化的基础上热爱祖国自己文化的态度,让学生正确认识古典诗词的精神美。最后在自我感悟中陶冶情操,明心启智。
Good afternoon, teachers, It’s my great pleasure to be here sharing my lesson with you.The content of my lesson is Senior English Book 3 Unit 5 Canada —— “The true North”.I’ll be ready to begin this lesson from five parts. Analysis of the teaching material,the teaching methods,the studying methods, the teaching procedure,and Blackboard design.First, let me talk about the teaching material.Part 1 Teaching Material:This unit is about the introduction of Canada. By studying of this unit,we’ll enable the students to learn the geography, population, main cities, and natural beauty, natural resources of Canada. Through the training of the unit, it also requires students to learn some Language skills such as the expressions of position and emotions.So it plays an important part in the English teaching in this book.After studying the teaching material and analyzing the rule of children’s growing of mind,I think the teaching aims are the followings:1.Knowledge objects:(1) make the students learn some new words and phrases(2) make the students understand the content of the lesson.2.Ability objects:(1)To develop the Ss’ abilities of listening, speaking, reading and writing. Especially reading and speaking ability.(2) learn to talk about the characters of Canada in English(3)To train the Ss’ ability of working in pairs.3.Emotion objects:(1)Enable students to understand the characters of Canada..(2)Stimulate Ss to work hard to make China stronger.Part 2 Teaching Methods:I think helping students learn to master new words and phrases and improve the students’ reading and speaking ability is import and the difficult.According to the analysis of the teaching material and the import points and the difficult points,I will use the following teaching methods : question-guiding approach; fast-reading and careful reading; multi-media teaching methods; discussion
Textbook: Senior English for China (Book 4), by Liu Daoyi Time Allotment: 1 period (40 minutes)Date: March 20, 2014Teaching aids: blackboard, Multi-media, Power Point, chalk I. Text Analysis (教材分析)This unit is about body language, and the text selected in the reading part demonstrates the difference and similarity of body language in many parts of the world. Through learning this passage, students are required to raise their awareness of using body language in different parts of the world. As body language is closely related to our daily life, it is easy to arouse students’ interest in learning this text. Reading skills and speaking training are designed around the text.II. Teaching Objectives (教学目标)By the end of the lesson, students will be able to:1. Language Skill Objective(语言技能目标): develop reading ability (skimming and scanning)as well as speaking ability.2. Cultural Knowledge Objective(文化知识目标): know about the cultural differences of using body language.3. Affective Objective(情感目标): increase students’ awareness of using body language correctly in different cultures. III.Teaching Focuses and Difficulties(教学重点和难点)1. Teaching Focuses(教学重点): the difference and similarity of body language in many parts of the world.2. Teaching Difficulties(教学难点): develop students’ reading abilities of skimming and scanning and ask the students to show their opinions with fluent English.
Step 2 Pre-listeningAfter students finish their discussion, I will show a picture of Newton and ask them: Who is him? What is he famous for? Could you find out some words to describe him? Maybe students will answer that he is genius for his finding of theGravitation, making a great contribution to the progress of human being. At that time I will show another two pictures of Einstein and Hawking, letting students guess who they are and write down their idea about the Gravitation. For I have arranged them to search more information about the gravity before this class, Students have beenfamiliar with the topic and will not be afraid about this abstract conception, which is helpful for their listening.Step 3 While-listeningIn this step, students will be required to listen the material for three times. The first and listening is extensive listening and the second and third listening is intensive listening. In the first time, They are required to listen a material including Part 1 and Part 2 and choose the best summary of the listening text. After they choose the right answer, They also need work in group to explain what is wrong with the others. Then I will make a conclusion that we should pay attention to the first paragraph and last paragraph and some keys to get the main idea. By doing this, their capacity of generalization will have a great improvement.Before the second listening, I will ask students to scan the blank on the power point quickly and ask them to note down some key words .Then ask them to listen to the Part 1again and fill the first column of the chart. Maybe some students just show the ideas of these three scientists an still can’t catch their development of gravity. Therefore, I will ask them to listen to Part 2 again and fill in the rest. After finish the listening, I will give them ten minutes to discuss with their partner. I will also guidethem to improve their answers when they discuss with others.
Then I would ask them to think of a funny English or Chinese and tell it to partners. While telling stories, they can use expressions and some acting to help make the story funny. 5 minutes would be given to do this.Those stories they told there will be the material for their writing. Soletting them tell it at first is helpful. And they can make a difference between telling a funny story and writing it down. Generally speaking, it is difficult forstudents to write well because they don’t know what to write and how to write. Asking them to tell their own stories at first can help them come up with what to write.After their telling, I would invite someone to share his/her story with all of us and I would write it down on the blackboard.This example story would be used as a sample to illustrate the format of funny story. Different from a story from teacher or textbook, a story from students can obviously become a interesting material to draw students’ attention.Then I would ask the whole class to put this story into several parts. It might be a little bit difficult for them. So I would ask them to find out whether all the sentences are necessary. After delete some sentences, there are 6 sentences left behind. Then they can easily put them into three parts. After interaction with students, I would teach them the right terms for each part and conclude the format of funny story.This step is the key and difficult point in my lesson. So I mainly usetask-based teaching method in this part and the task for students was divided into several stages. With the separated difficult level, students can find there are usually three parts in writing. They can also learn to write without the unnecessary parts in the process of analyzing. And then I wouldn’t rush to tell them the right terms to them directly. Instead, I would ask them to name them by their own. A confused mind is better for acquiring knowledge.While-writing:Then I would give students 7 minutes to write down this story, without other requirements.With all the preparations in pre-writing, students’ difficulties were cleared. So it would be much easier for them to write down the story within 7 minutes. There are no other requirements because students’ first writing is actually a drafting. It would be revise and edit several times later. Writing, as a skill