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新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations-Reading for Writing教学设计一
The topic of this part is “Write about your festival experience”.During the Listening and Speaking and Talking, students are just asked to say out their festival experiences such as the Spring Festival, Mid-autumn Day, but this part students will be asked to write down their own festival experiences. During the reading part, it introduces the Naadam Festival in Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region, which can give students a good example to imitate. Students not only learn the festival, but touch and feel the Inner Mongolian’s character, the spirit and cultural atmosphere, which can help students form the cultural awareness and learn to enjoy and value the diversity of Chinese culture.Concretely, the dairy tells the experience that the author spent the Naadam Festival in Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region with his/her friend. The structure is clear. In the opening paragraph, it introduces the topic of the Naadam Festival and the whole feeling. Then it introduces the items of the festival like the ceremony, wrestling and horse racing. Finally, it summarizes this experience. Because this part is a travel journal, we must guide students pay more attention to these details: 1. use the first person. 2. use the past tense to tell the past thing and use the present or future tense to describe the scenery. 3. use the timeline to tell the development. 4. be careful for the author’s psychology, emotion and feeling, etc.1. Read quickly to get main idea; read carefully to get the detailed information about Naadam Festival.2. Learn the structure of the reading article and language.3. Write an article about a festival experience4. Learn to use the psychology, emotions and feeling in the writing.1. Write an article about a festival experience.2. Use the structure of the reading article and language.
北师大初中数学八年级上册二次根式及其化简2教案
属于此类问题一般有以下三种情况①具体数字，此时化简的条件已暗中给定，②恒为非负值或根据题中的隐含条件，如（1）小题。③给出明确的条件，如（2）小题。第二类，需讨论后再化简。当题目中给定的条件不能判定绝对值符号内代数式值的符号时，则需讨论后化简，如（4）小题。例3．已知a+b=-6,ab=5，求 的值。解：∵ab=5>0,∴a,b同号，又∵a+b=-6<0,∴a<0,b<0∴ .说明：此题中的隐含条件a<0,b<0不能忽视。否则会出现错误。例4．化简： 解：原式=|x-6|-|1+2x|+|x+5|令x-6=0，得x=6，令1+2x=0，得 ，令x+5=0，得x=-5.这样x=6, ,x=-5，把数轴分成四段（四个区间）在这五段里分别讨论如下：当x≥6时，原式=(x-6)-(1+2x)+(x+5)=-2.当 时，原式=-(x-6)-(1+2x)+(x+5)=-2x+10.当 时，原式=-(x-6)-[-(1+2x)]+(x+5)=2x+12.当x<-5时，原式=-(x-6)+(1+2x)-(x+5)=2.说明：利用公式 ，如果绝对值符号里面的代数式的值的符号无法决定，则需要讨论。方法是：令每一个绝对值内的代数式为零，求出对应的“零点”，再用这些“零点”把数轴分成若干个区间，再在每个区间内进行化简。
北师大初中数学九年级上册位似多边形及其性质2教案
（3）分别在射线OA，OB，OC，OD上取点A′、B′、C′、D′，使得 ；（4）顺次连接A ′B′、B′C′、C′D′、D′A′，得到所要画的四边形A′B′C′D′，如图2．问：此题目还可以 如何画出图形？作法二 ：（1）在四边形ABCD外任取一点 O；（2）过点O分别作射线OA， OB， OC，OD；（3）分别在射线OA， OB， OC， OD的反向延长线上取点A′、B′、C′、D′，使得 ；（4）顺次连接A ′B′、B′ C′、C′D′、D′A′，得到所 要画的四边形A′B′C′D′，如图3． 作法三：（1）在四边形ABCD内任取一点O；（2）过点O分别作 射线OA，OB，OC，OD；（3）分别在射线OA，OB，OC，OD上取点A′、B′、C′、D′，使得 ；（4）顺次连接A′B′、B′C ′、C′D′、D′A′，得到所要画的四边形A′B′C′D′，如图4．（当点O在四边形ABCD的一条边上或在四边形ABCD的一个顶点上时，作法略——可以让学生自己完成）三、课堂练习 活动3 教材习题小结：谈谈你这节课学习的收获．
北师大初中数学九年级上册一元二次方程的解及其估算2教案
（1）x可能小于0吗？说说你的理由；_____________________________.（2）x可能大于4吗？可能大于2.5吗？为什么？（3）完成下表x 0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.52x2-13x+11 （4）你知道地毯花边的宽x(m)是多少吗？还有其他求解方法吗？与同伴交流。探索2：梯子底端滑动的距离x(m)满足方程(x+6)2+72=102，也就是x2+12x―15=0（1）你能猜出滑动距离x(m)的大致范围吗？（2）x的整数部分是_____？十分位是_______？x 0 x2+12x-15 所以 ___<x<___进一步计算x x2+12x-15 所以 ___<x<___因此x 的整数部分是___,十分位是___.三、当堂训练：完成课本34页随堂练习四、学习体会：五、课后作业
北师大初中数学九年级上册一元二次方程的解及其估算2教案
探索1：上节我们列出了与地毯的花边宽度有关的方程。地毯花边的宽x(m)，满足方程 (8―2x)(5―2x)=18也就是：2x2―13x+11=0你能估算出地毯花边的宽度x吗？（1）x可能小于0吗？说说你的理由；_____________________________.（2）x可能大于4吗？可能大于2.5吗？为什么？（3）完成下表x 0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.52x2-13x+11 （4）你知道地毯花边的宽x(m)是多少吗？还有其他求解方法吗？与同伴交流。探索2：梯子底端滑动的距离x(m)满足方程(x+6)2+72=102，也就是x2+12x―15=0（1）你能猜出滑动距离x(m)的大致范围吗？（2）x的整数部分是_____？十分位是_______？x 0 x2+12x-15 所以 ___<x<___进一步计算x x2+12x-15 所以 ___<x<___因此x 的整数部分是___,十分位是___.三、当堂训练：完成课本34页随堂练习四、学习体会：五、课后作业
《卖懒》教学设计教案
1.制作红灯笼师：（展示漂亮的灯笼）小朋友们想不想自己亲手制作一个呢？生：好呀师：那小朋友们知道制作灯笼需要什么材料吗？生：彩纸、剪刀...师：没错，那老师先来展示一下怎么制作灯笼吧！（展示完后，开始让小朋友两两组合共同制作）2.制作灯笼剪纸师：小朋友们，刚刚是不是已经制作灯笼了呀？下面我们进行一个更好玩的环节？生：好呀好呀！师：那我先来展示一下咯，小朋友们别眨眼呀！（展示完后，开始让小朋友们独立完成）小结：通过制作共同合作制作灯笼与独自完成灯笼剪影，不仅使他们更能感知灯笼的形状，更能提高小朋友们的动手能力和思考力。
《琵琶行》教学设计
文本分析《琵琶行》作为白居易最为出名的诗歌之一，内容详实，情感动人，在诗歌中，白居易塑造了两个形象极为鲜明的人物——琵琶女&作者本人。一个是江湖薄命人，一个是官场失意者。两个本无交集的人因为京都琵琶声相遇，互诉衷肠后，发出“同是天涯沦落人，相逢何必曾相识“的感慨
高教版中职数学基础模块下册：6.3《等比数列》教学设计
课题序号6-3授课形式讲授与练习课题名称等比数列课时2教学 目标知识 目标理解并掌握等比数列的概念，掌握并能应用等比数列的通项公式及前n项和公式。能力 目标通过公式的推导和应用，使学生体会从特殊到一般，再从一般到特殊的思维规律，初步形成认识问题、分析问题、解决问题的一般思路和方法 。素质 目标通过对等比数列知识的学习，培养学生细心观察、认真分析、正确总结的科学思维习惯和严谨的学习态度。教学 重点等比数列的概念及通项公式、前n项和公式的推导过程及运用。教学 难点对等比数列的通项公式与求和公式变式运用。教学内容 调整无学生知识与 能力准备数列的概念课后拓展 练习 习题（P.21）： 3，4．教学 反思 教研室 审核
高教版中职数学基础模块下册：6.2《等差数列》教学设计
系（部）医药授课教师戚文撷授课班级11(5),11（6）班授课类型新授课授课时数2课时授课周数第一周授课日期2012.2.15授课地点 教室课题第六章数列分课题§6.2 等差数列教学目标1. 理解等差数列的概念，掌握等差数列的通项公式；掌握等差中项的概念． 2. 逐步灵活应用等差数列的概念和通项公式解决问题． 3.等差数列的前N项之和 ． 4．培养学生分析、比较、归纳的逻辑思维能力． ． 2． 3．教学重点等差数列的概念及其通项公式． 教学难点等差数列通项公式的灵活运用． 教学方法情境教学法、自主探究式教学方法教学器材及设备黑板、粉笔复习提问提问内容姓名成绩1．数列的定义？ 答： 2. 数列的通项公式？ 答： 板书设计 §6.2.1等差数列的概念 1． 1.等差数列的定义 公差：d 2.常数列 3．等差数列的通项公式 an＝a1＋(n－1)d． 等差数列的前n 项和公式： 例题 练习作业布置习题第1，2题．课后小结本节课主要采用自主探究式教学方法．充分利用现实情景，尽可能地增加教学过程的趣味性、实践性．我再整个教学中强调学生的主动参与，让学生自己去分析、探索，在探索过程中研究和领悟得出的结论，从而达到使学生既获得知识又发展智能的目的．
【高教版】中职数学拓展模块：3.1《排列与组合》优秀教学设计
教 学 过 程教师 行为学生 行为教学 意图时间 *揭示课题 3．1 排列与组合． *创设情境 兴趣导入 基础模块中，曾经学习了两个计数原理．大家知道： （1）如果完成一件事，有N类方式.第一类方式有k1种方法，第二类方式有k2种方法，……，第n类方式有kn种方法，那么完成这件事的方法共有 = + +…+（种）． （3.1） （2）如果完成一件事，需要分成N个步骤．完成第1个步骤有k1种方法，完成第2个步骤有k2种方法，……，完成第n个步骤有kn种方法，并且只有这n个步骤都完成后，这件事才能完成，那么完成这件事的方法共有 = · ·…·（种）． （3.2） 下面看一个问题： 在北京、重庆、上海3个民航站之间的直达航线，需要准备多少种不同的机票？ 这个问题就是从北京、重庆、上海3个民航站中，每次取出2个站，按照起点在前，终点在后的顺序排列，求不同的排列方法的总数. 首先确定机票的起点，从3个民航站中任意选取1个，有3种不同的方法；然后确定机票的终点，从剩余的2个民航站中任意选取1个，有2种不同的方法．根据分步计数原理，共有3×2=6种不同的方法，即需要准备6种不同的飞机票： 北京→重庆，北京→上海，重庆→北京，重庆→上海，上海→北京，上海→重庆. 介绍 播放 课件 质疑 了解 观看 课件 思考 引导 启发学生得出结果 0 15*动脑思考 探索新知 我们将被取的对象（如上面问题中的民航站）叫做元素，上面的问题就是：从3个不同元素中，任取2个，按照一定的顺序排成一列，可以得到多少种不同的排列. 一般地，从n个不同元素中，任取m (m≤n)个元素，按照一定的顺序排成一列，叫做从n个不同元素中取出m个元素的一个排列，时叫做选排列，时叫做全排列. 总结 归纳 分析 关键 词语 思考 理解 记忆 引导学生发现解决问题方法 20
《消费及其类型》教案
(一) 情景导入： 教师活动：以设问方式导入该节课的内容，带出问题——作 为一个社会人，同学们的日常消费活动包括哪些项目? 学生活动：就日常生活的体验得出相应的回应，例如：买文具、食 堂吃饭、买零食、买衣服、电话费等日常消费活动。 教师活动：多媒体课件展示丰富多彩的消费活动，其中主要集中于学生可能并有实际经验的消费内容。
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 3 Diverse Cultures-Discovering Useful Structure教学设计
Step 4 PracticeRead the conversation. Find out which words have been left out.Justin: Linlin, I’m going to Guizhou Province next month. I’m super excited! Any recommendations for places to visit?Linlin: Wow, cool! Guizhou is a province with a lot of cultural diversity. Places to visit...well, definitely the Huangguoshu Waterfall first.Justin: What’s special about the waterfall?Linlin: Well, have you ever heard of the Chinese novel Journey to the West ?Justin: Yes, I have. Why ?Linlin: In the back of the waterfall, you will find a cave, which is the home of the Monkey King.Justin: Really? Cool! I’ll definitely check it out.Linlin:And I strongly recommend the ethnic minority villages. You’ll find Chinese culture is much more diverse than you thought.Justin:Sounds great, thanks.Answers:Justin: Linlin, I’m going to Guizhou Province next month. I’m super excited! Do you have any recommendations for places to visit?Linlin: Wow, that’s cool! Guizhou is a province with a lot of cultural diversity. What are some places to visit in Guizhou ? Well, definitely the Huangguoshu Waterfall is the first place to visit in Guizhou Province.Justin: What’s special about the waterfall?Linlin: Well, have you ever heard of the Chinese novel Journey to the West ?Justin: Yes, I have heard of the Chinese novel Journey to the West . Why do you ask if I have heard of the Chinese novel Journey to the West?Linlin: In the back of the waterfall, you will find a cave, which is the home of the Monkey King from Journey to the West.Justin: That’s really true? It’s Cool! I’ll definitely check it out.Linlin:And I strongly recommend the ethnic minority villages on your trip to Guizhou Province. You’ll find Chinese culture is much more diverse than you thought it was.Justin:This all sounds great, thanks.
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 3 Diverse Cultures-Reading for Writing教学设计
The topic of this part is “Describe a place with distinctive cultural identity”.This section focuses on Chinese culture by introducing Chinatown, whose purpose is to show the relationship between the Chinese culture and American culture. The Chinese culture in Chinatown is an important part of American culture. Chinatown is an important window of spreading Chinese culture and the spirit homeland of oversea Chinese, where foreigners can experience Chinese culture by themselves.Concretely, the title is “Welcome to Chinatown!”, from which we can know that the article aims at introducing Chinatown. The author used the “Introduction--Body Paragraph--Conclusion” to describe the people, language, architecture, business, famous food and drinks and people’s activities, which can be a centre for Chinese culture and shows its unique charm.1. Read quickly to get main idea; read carefully to get the detailed information.2. Learn the characteristics of writing and language.3. Learn to introduce your own town according to the text.4. Learn to correct others’ writing.1. Learn the characteristics of writing and language.2. Learn to introduce your own town according to the text.Step 1 Lead in ---Small talkIn the reading part, we mentioned the Chinatown of San Francisco. How much do you know about Chinatown of San Francisco ?Chinatown is a main living place for Chinese immigrants, where you can see many Chinese-style buildings, costumes, operas, restaurants, music and even hear Chinese.Step 2 Before reading ---Predict the contentWhat is the writer’s purpose of writing this text ? How do you know ?From the title(Welcome to Chinatown) and some key words from the text(tourist, visit, visitors, experience), we can know the purpose of the text is to introduce Chinatown and show the relationship between Chinese culture and American culture.
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 3 Diverse Cultures-Listening &Speaking＆Talking教学设计
1. In Picture 1 and Picture 2, where do you think they are from? How do you know?From their wearings, we can know they are from ethnic minority of China--- Miao and Dong.Picture 1, they are playing their traditional instrument lusheng in their traditional costumes.Picture 2. the girls are Miao because they wear their traditional costumes and silver accessory.2. In Picture 3, can you find which village it is? What time is it in the picture?It is Dong village. It is at night. Step 2 While-listeningJustin met a new friend while traveling in Guizhou. Listen to their conversation and complete the summaries below.Part 1Justin and Wu Yue watched some Miao people play the lusheng. The instrument has a history of over 3,000 years and it is even mentioned in the oldest collection of Chinese poetry. Then they watched the lusheng dance. Justin wanted to buy some hand-made silver/traditional accessories as souvenirs. He was told that the price will depend on the percentage of silver. Part 2They will go to a pretty Dong minority village called Zhaoxing. they will see the drum towers and the wind and rain bridges. They may also see a performance of the Grand Song of the Dong people.Step 3 Post-listening---TalkingWork in groups. Imagine Justin is telling some friends about his trip to Guizhou. One of you is Justin and the rest of you are his friends. Ask Justin questions about his trip and experience. The following expressions may help you.
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 3 Diverse Cultures-Reading and Thinking教学设计
Discuss these questions in groups.Q1: Have you ever been to a place that has a diverse culture ? What do you think about the culture diversity ?One culturally diverse place that I have been to is Harbin, the capital city of Heilongjiang Province. I went there last year with my family to see the Ice and Snow Festival, and I was amazed at how the culture as different to most other Chinese cities. There is a big Russian influence there, with beautiful Russian architecture and lots of interesting restaurants. I learnt that Harbin is called “the Oriental Moscow” and that many Russians settled there to help build the railway over 100 years ago.Q2: What are the benefits and challenges of cultural diversity ?The benefits: People are able to experience a wide variety of cultures, making their lives more interesting, and it can deepen the feelings for our national culture, it is also helpful for us to learn about other outstanding culture, which helps improve the ability to respect others. The challenges: People may have trouble communicating or understanding each other, and it may lead to disappearance of some civilizations and even make some people think “The western moon is rounder than his own.”Step 7 Post reading---RetellComplete the passage according to the text.Today, I arrived back in San Francisco, and it feels good (1) _____(be) back in the city again. The city succeeded in (2)_________ (rebuild) itself after the earthquake that (3)________ (occur) in 1906, and I stayed in the Mission District, enjoying some delicious noodles mixed with cultures. In the afternoon, I headed to a local museum (4)____ showed the historical changes in California. During the gold rush, many Chinese arrived, and some opened up shops and restaurants in Chinatown to earn a (5)_____ (live). Many others worked on (6)______ (farm), joined the gold rush, or went to build the railway that connected California to the east. The museum showed us (7)____ America was built by immigrants from (8)________ (difference) countries and cultures. In the evening, I went to Chinatown, and ate in a Cantonese restaurant that served food on (9)________(beauty) china plates. Tomorrow evening, I’m going to (10)__ jazz bar in the Richmond District. 答案：1. to be 2. rebuilding 3. occurred 4. that 5.living6. farms 7.how 8. different 9. beautiful 10. a
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 2 Morals and Virtues-Reading for Writing教学设计
1. 这个寓言是一个关于一位国王古寓言。 The fable is an old fable about a king.2.作者用这个故事让读者对于社区的问题负有个人责任的必要印象深刻。The author used the story to impress upon readers with the need to take personal responsibility for problems in the community.3. 这个故事十分成功的实现了它的目的。The story was quite successful in achieving its purpose.Step 7 WritingPlease write a review of the story according the outline above.The fable is an old fable about a king who thought his people are lazy, so he put a large stone in the middle of the road and hides and waited to see if anyone will try to move it.The author used this story to impress upon readers with the need to take personal responsibility for problems in the community. The story was quite successful in achieving its purpose, and I liked it because it had a clear moral.However, while the moral of the story is clear, the actions of the king seemed pointless to me, because none of the characters in the story learnt anything. For this reason, I think there are better stories that can be used to impress upon people with the need for personal responsibility.Step 8 Pair workExchange drafts with a partner. Use this checklist to help your partner revise his/her draft.1. Does the writer give a short description of the story ?2. Does the description include the most important details of the story ?3. Does the writer give his or her opinion about the character or their actions ?4. Is the review well-organised ? 5. Does the writer use the -ing form as the adverbial correctly in the writing ?6. Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors ?Step 9 HomeworkPut up your revised draft in the classroom or read it to your class.
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 4 Space Exploration-Listening&Speaking&Talking教学设计一
Listening and Speaking introduces the topic of “talking about how to become an astronaut”. This period is aimed to inform students some details about the requirements of being an astronaut. Students can be motivated and inspired by the astronauts. Teachers ought to encourage students to learn from them and let them aim high and dream big.Listening and Talking introduces the theme of "talk about life in space". This part also informs students more details about life in space and can inspire students to be curious about this job. 1. Guide students to listen for numbers concerning dates, years and ages etc2. Cultivate students' ability to talk about how to become an astronaut and life in space ; 3. Instruct students to use functional sentences of the dialogue such as “ first of all, I am not sure, so what might be .. I guess.. I wonder…I am curious…)appropriately.1. Guide students to understand the content of listening texts in terms of the whole and key details; 2. Cultivate students' ability to guess the meaning of words in listening; discuss with their peers how to become a qualified astronaut and describe the life in space.Part 1: Listening and SpeakingStep 1: Lead inPredictionThe teacher can ask students to predict what the listening text is about by looking at the pictures.About how to become an astronaut./the requirements of an astronautStep 2: Then, play the radio which is about an interview a. And after finishing listening for the first time, the students need to solve the following tasks.
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 4 Space Exploration-Discovering Useful Structure教学设计
The theme of the section is “Describe space facts and efforts to explore space”. Infinitives are one of non-finite verbs, as the subjects, objects, predicative, attributes and adverbials. This unit is about space exploration, which is a significant scientific activity, so every scientific activity has strong planning. Therefore, using the infinitives to show its purpose, explanations or restrictions is the best choice.1. Learn the structure, functions and features of infinitives.2. Learn to summarize some rules about infinitives to show purpose and modify.3. Learn to use infinitives in oral and writing English. 1. Learn the structure, functions and features of infinitives.2. Learn to summarize some rules about infinitives to show purpose and modify.3. Learn to use use infinitives in oral and writing English.Step 1 Lead in---Pair workLook at the following sentences and focus on the italicized infinitives. In pairs, discuss their functions. 1. I trained for a long time to fly airplanes as a fighter pilot..(作目的状语)2. As we all know, an astronaut needs to be healthy and calm in order to work in space..(作目的状语)3. First of all, you must be intelligent enough to get a related college degree..(作目的状语)4. Some scientist were determined to help humans realise their dream to explore space..(作定语)5. On 12 April 1961, Yuri Gagarin became the first person in the world to go into space..(作定语)Summary:1. 不定式的结构：to+do原形。2. 分析上面的句子，我们知道在描述太空探索时，动词不定式不仅可以用来表目的，还可以用来作定语，表修饰。
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 4 Space Exploration-Listening&Speaking＆Talking教学设计二
The themes of this part are “Talk about how to become an astronaut” and “Talk about life in space”. As Neil Armstrong said “Mystery creates wonder and wonder is the basis of man’s desire to understand. Space is difficult for human to reach, therefore, humans are full of wonders about it. However, if wanting to achieve the dream of reaching the Moon, some of our human should work hard to be an astronaut at first. Part A(Talk about how to become an astronaut) is a radio interview in a radio studio, where the host asked the Chinese astronauts about his story how to become an astronaut. Yang Liwei told his dreamed to be an astronaut since childhood. Then he worked hard to get into college at 22. The next 10 years, he gradually became an experienced pilot. At the same time, to be an astronaut, he had to study hard English, science and astronomy and trained hard to keep in good physical and mental health and to practise using space equipment. Part B (Talk about life in space) is also an interview with the astronaut Brown, who is back on the earth. The host Max asked about his space life, such as his emotion about going back the earth, the eating, shower, brushing, hobbies and his work. Part A and Part B are interviews. So expressing curiosity about the guests’ past life is a communicative skill, which students should be guided to learn.1. Students can get detailed information about how Yang Liwei became an astronaut and Max’s space life.2. Students learn to proper listening strategy to get detailed information---listening for numbers and taking notes.3. Students can learn related sentences or phrases to express their curiosity like “ I wish to know...” “I’d love to know...”4. Students can learn more about the space and astronauts, even be interested in working hard to be an astronaut
新人教版高中英语必修3Unit 4 Space Exploration-Reading for Writing教学设计二
⑦在我看来, 探索太空是值得的。As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore the space.Step 10 Writing---draftRecently, students in our class have had heated a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. Students hold different ideas about it.30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life and is a waste of money. And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earth’s problems such as starvation and pollution.On the other hand，70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it，such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast. What’s more，with further space research，we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. Also，space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore the space. Not only can it promote the development of society but also enrich our life. Step 11 Pair workExchange drafts with a partner. Use this checklist to help your partner revise his/her draft.1.Does the writer explain why he/she changed/wanted to change?2.Does the writer tell how the changes have improved or will improve his/her life?3.Is the text well－organised?4.Does the writer use words and expressions to show similarities and differences?5.Are there any grammar or spelling errors?6.Does the writer use correct punctuation？